black bird

In distant, dark places- A factory, unbound- The smog and hazy smoke Call to us. To breathe the smoke Is disgraceful? To breathe the smog Is life. The assembly lines ...

I really like the one of the tree. The colors are so vibrant. (:

Set in the 60's. Loosely based off the song "Eight Miles High," by The Byrds ----- When I first arrived off the plane, I thought at first that the city ...

Oh, wow! That was amazing! Just...amazing. :) I don't know what it's about really, but your words and rhythm are so good! Is it about someone drowning/sinking? That's just my ...

I liked this. I feel the overall story with the struggle will be interesting. I'm sure someone else has probably mentioned this, but you should break it up into more ...

Thank you!

Thank you very very much. :)

I really liked this. I liked the language you used, and the first paragraph was a good hook to draw us in. I think the second ending was better, but ...

Oh man, that's rough. :(

Well, this is my first story ever posted on here. I wrote it when I was bored at lunch one day, and it was just kind of written in a ...

Wow, I almost don't want to use spoons anymore. The next time I eat soup I'm going to feel so bad! Haha. I think it's really interesting that you chose ...

Wow, I really liked this. I'm not a huge poem reader, but I liked the images you used, such as, "scorches like first winter frost". I like how it's a ...

Hey. :) I'm Cindy, and I'm new here. I'm not really sure how everything works just yet, but I'm going to try to learn so I can be an active ...